Let me just address Asbel real quick. On the overall, I think you're doing a bang-up job and I love him soooooo much! Like, thiiiiiiiiiiiiisss much. There's one thing that's bugging me though, and I'm not sure if this is me or not, but I get the feeling that on rare occasions, your Asbel is a little too derpy? Like, he's an incredible derp when it comes down to how other people feel about him. Or each other, for that matter. That's very true and you've got that nailed. But I've seen your Asbel get confused about every day stuff and I'm not sure if he ever did that in the game.

I actually can't find an example. I tried backtracking through Asbel's journal, only to come up empty, so I'm not sure where I saw this happen. Probably a thread on someone else's journal, uhm... Well, either way, it's just something to keep in mind and the fact that I can't find it anymore just proves that it doesn't happen often. And as I said, it might be that this happens in the game as well and I just never noticed it.

So yup. That's it. Again, I love your Asbel thiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiisss much. ♥