You have Dawn's voice down perfectly...and I'm going to echo Tori here. I really couldn't stand Dawn in canon. She drove me batty. But, while staying completely in character, you've made Dawn a joy to stalk.

I liked the little thread she and Jilly had (though...I think I might have dropped it in my failtastic disappearances), and I've loved stalking her posts. All around, she's just excellent to read. Bravo!