While I think I've gotten better about making Pil's responses a little less...bland, I have noticed that she might be talking about herself more than necessary at times, so I'm working on that. Also, I'm thinking she might be a little repetitive these days, so I'm working on that.
Any crit would be great; if there's a way I can improve, lay it on me!
Mel
While I think I've gotten better about making Pil's responses a little less...bland, I have noticed that she might be talking about herself more than necessary at times, so I'm working on that. Also, I'm thinking she might be a little repetitive these days, so I'm working on that.
Any crit would be great; if there's a way I can improve, lay it on me!