Either here or in my HMD post, It's cool. If you know how Spartans behave in general in the books, and/or have seen the episode Homecoming, I'd appreciate any sort of crit.
Subjects in which I'd like to see how am I doing are concerning Halo Legends' Homecoming, Halo canon (books, particularly), military knowledge (behavior, structure, methodology, and theory), entertainment value, character consistency and development, grammar and spelling, use of the language, pacing and posting, activity, mun manners, and anything and everything.
Jaydee
Either here or in my HMD post, It's cool. If you know how Spartans behave in general in the books, and/or have seen the episode Homecoming, I'd appreciate any sort of crit.
Subjects in which I'd like to see how am I doing are concerning Halo Legends' Homecoming, Halo canon (books, particularly), military knowledge (behavior, structure, methodology, and theory), entertainment value, character consistency and development, grammar and spelling, use of the language, pacing and posting, activity, mun manners, and anything and everything.