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Daisy | SPARTAN-023 ([personal profile] daisy023) wrote in [personal profile] lucetimods 2012-10-18 06:21 am (UTC)

Own observations

-Slow to tag. Barely passed AC because of it. Some of the ones right now have a week old. It's understandable when the only time to tag is at night, but when one arrives home without the mind to write, it would be better if I focused on a handful of ones that I could boomerang-tag, perhaps. Weekends are the better days to try this.

-Too spread out. Likewise, counting this game and some others. Will be necessary to drop Lynne from SRWUGA, given I haven't done anything with her, anyway. Focusing only on a handful of threads, only critical ones for the plot of Luceti and the ones of Daisy's development, may perhaps be the best course of action. That... and dropping some of the threads I have right now.

-Military material. I hate to admit this, but I didn't read the civil disturbance handbook as closely as I did with the others. There's still the platoon handbook, and a few others Daisy might need.

-Canon review. Homecoming is easy to canon review for, but it also involves content from the books. Even with her desire for a civilian life, she sometimes acts too much like a civilian when meeting people. While John used to be inept when he first met Cortana, he still remained solid against her teasing. Currently on the Fall of Reach, but indirectly involves Ghosts of Onyx and First Strike, as well.

Halo 4, of course, would be some interesting canon review. Kind of shame won't come out until November 6. Likewise, if the ViDocs are speaking the truth, it could show a little more on what a Spartan is like out of his element.

-Need to expand CR. While she's a little more established within her circles, tagging out two or so new characters wouldn't hurt. I think I've stuck with only the people Daisy knows so far.

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