~I don't know if it's your or the TH icons that are getting to me. XD haha

Critique? You're an awesome player who writes like they've had lots of experience with RP's, and it's an honour to have a cr with you! The way you react to posts is so IC that sometimes I have to convince myself that, no, you are actually not Loki.....right? hahaha
I hope Loki and Spock can get into all sorts of mischief. ^_^
Cheers!