Activity Check Results / HMD

[lucetimods]

The results for the Activity Check are in. Please note that the following characters were either inactive, didn't post to the activity check, or failed to speak to a moderator about their activity. Also added were characters who have dropped, for your convenience. Also for some reason a few usernames were not on the Friend Add/Remove, and I have no idea why, but they're added to this copy-pasta :|; Sorry about that guys.

Copy-paste the following here:

friend remove dance_mypuppets friend remove hatesghosts friend remove he_never_dies friend remove ooh_kamina friend remove pathtoseele friend remove regive friend remove smokingdemon friend remove talvimyrskyn friend remove a_childish_lord friend remove merelyaweapon friend remove uncapsulated friend remove skulljokelol friend remove threeswordsoul friend remove totheuttereast friend remove sittingtype friend remove shrouded_reaper friend remove allthefunever friend remove restoretheworld friend remove wonribbons friend remove deathtakesashot friend remove weightlesscrab friend remove infinitepath friend remove onlykissesgirls friend remove kissdiet friend remove seeksdreams friend remove gekkoukanclown friend remove spade_of_fire friend remove agamechanger friend remove rebellingheart friend remove broken_messiah friend remove flower_of_hell friend remove redroseprince friend remove targetprime friend remove starts_destiny friend remove eternallysinned friend remove whichwayagain friend remove byebyehalcyon friend remove colony_brat friend remove boxedoff friend remove windythings friend remove strayfag friend remove choseheroism friend remove scarletspeedstr friend remove rathersolitary friend remove threeswordsoul friend remove oflambs friend remove gravity_splode friend remove andallaretrue friend remove gamblinghigh friend remove knighted_lion friend remove likevegeta friend remove dakingofawesome friend remove nowordsrequired friend remove redheaded_rock friend remove likenappa friend remove pifflelandlady friend remove tofu_furget friend add survivethesiren friend add sanzu_watashi friend add letsplaysurgeon friend add thestormishere friend add orderblade friend add abidinglaw

A number of you passed the activity check, but barely. (You know who you are.) Try to pick things up, as it's no fun to character-squat.

If there are any mistakes here, please let us know! Additionally, if your character was removed and you're still active, feel free to appeal to one of us about keeping your character. However, please remember next time to stay active and post to the Activity Check. Thank you!

And as always:

HMD

How's My Driving?

This is a crit post for both the community and game and for your characters. If you have something you'd like to see us improve upon with the game, PLEASE TELL US HERE! Anon commenting is on, but if anything gets really nasty there will be warnings and thread-freezing. This isn't required but everyone is encouraged to take advantage of the advice of your fellow players!

Just some pointers: no taking cheap shots, no dragging personal issues into things and for the love of all that is wise and great, please double check your replies and comments before posting them. Sometimes a change in phrasing can make all the difference between a helpful tone and a condescending one.

ALSO ALSO: We'd like to clarify that HMD means HMD- which means it's okay to have both good and bad crit. Some people have expressed concerns about posting good/bad crit when a character already has bad/good crit posted. We'd like to encourage you guys to do it anyway! You can drive well or badly, and even good drivers make mistakes. So give it a try \o

Comments

Kisa

[voicesreason.livejournal.com]

Hermione Granger | Harry Potter | voicesreason

She also has a HMD on her journal as well! Aha, I've been a little busy and I'm absolutely terrified of Luceti... but I'm trying to get better at that. /o/ I feel like I've flopped all over... So give me what you've got!

[one-green-eye.livejournal.com]

As I have literally already told at least one person: as a reader of the books and watcher of the films, I'm really loving your Hermione. She sounds just like I'd imagine in this scenario, with just the right mixture of intelligence and caution. I've been slow, but I'm very much enjoying Ginko's thread with her.

[fourteen]

My only wish is that you weren't so scared! Your Hermione is absolutely wonderful and I just adore her. I hear her voice very clearly! We really won't bite you, I swear -- don't worry so much! ♥

[markofthewise]

Hey, it's good to see you're managing to stick it out this time. So I'm glad things seem to be working out for you! The only thing I'd suggest is just to be careful you don't lose track of your threads or anything. But other than that, keep it up!

[so_shik]

I'm so glad you're getting more comfortable with the game, Kisa, because your Hermione's a joy to thread with. My only bit of crit is to watch some of your tags for typos and misused words but I know you're also tagging when it's late.

I'm excited to see her interacting with people more and more. Keep it up, you'll get better

Re: Kisa

[greyangel.livejournal.com]

The only thing that occurred to me as odd was Hermione not being aware of the school at all (despite being linked the guide and such early on, which made it a little awkward for me, threadingwise), so it's more of an awareness-of-setting issue that you can keep in mind for the future.

Other than that, I really think you have her voice and interpretation down well, so you're good to go there! I hope you start feeling more comfortable in Luceti soon! ♥